Our Wonderful Future: Death 2.0

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  1. Chuck says:

    Unfortunately, for many of us, we have too MANY boring parts to fast forward thru…..let that be a lesson then right??? Let the dancing begin, I say…while we still can!!! (I think I’ll go put my “wings” back on….)

  2. Ed. says:

    Hurrah say I!

  3. Angela says:

    I would linger on the boring parts and skip the embarrassing bits, myself.

  4. Lucky says:

    Ah… When my dad was asked how he wanted to die, he said, “extreme old age.” He may have stolen that from Mark Twain, Groucho Marx, or W. C. Fields, I’m not sure.

    If I get the opportunity to review my life via Tivo before I die, I think I might use the “slow motion” feature rather than the fast fwd. Ol’ Mr. D will just have to wait for every boring detail.

  5. Horace Gaims says:

    Rather than brood over my inevitable death, ;living holds my interest.

  6. Ms.Colleen says:

    But in the meantime I’ll be –

    Rockin’ in the Free World!

    Trek tires burgeon through mud
    Streaming riven trail
    Human footprints trace slow motion
    I fly above them laughing
    Black splashback
    Mascaras my backpack
    I laugh and will sunshine
    to this wilderness of water, gravel, trees and slugs and smoke
    In time for the next gathering under the pavilion
    My will to join

    Embedded encampments
    Reinvent human interaction
    Assured as much in practice as intent
    Wet meadow grass interlaces buttercups wild roses saturated by three
    days of rain my wheels splitting the Red Sea before me as
    I ride

    Viscous terra unfirma sticks to toe and robe
    Crown and bare breast henna fingers beat the drum
    Strings coax the pattern
    The flute unfurls
    We sing one word

    Sun

    Each lifetime chanted dreamed implanted
    Virtue hangs predestined in our dna
    Beyond intent
    Cut free from the rest
    I breathe it in
    In motion breathe the Word

    Sun

    The ragged gray edge of the cloud quivers above us its edges lit
    A sudden breath of air levitates the sky
    As we in motion breathe the Word

    Sun

  7. Ms.Colleen says:

    Okay, okay, I admit that one didn’t have much to do with death. But perhaps this one does. The jury’s still out.

    THE HOT HINGES OF PARADISE

    Sometimes I’m grateful

    That the answer came from the man

    (Tender as he seems)

    And not from me

    Me

    Reeling back from the conundrum

    His gender lead me

    Knowing full well

    Gender only suggests

    That which abides behind reason

    Is a matter of extrapolation

    liberally laced with dna

    Straight laced side by side

    My irony in thinking it tender

    When in actuality it burns to the quick

    Any softness that word might imply

    Such malaprop

    Pours bitterness brewed darkly

    Drunk after the fact

    That tender artifice

    Of tender word

    Never knowing when rescue might come

    Cinderella strikes flint

    And finds her prince

    In the bitter dregs

    Doing battle

    With the not so tender night

    And sometimes I’m grateful

    That the answer came from the man

    (Tender as he seems)

    And not from me

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